Surprising Undergarments
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surprising undergarments worn
after sacred secret ceremonies
in temples built from tithes and offerings
videos show the faithful what to do
garments given Adam in Eden
reveal their eternal origins and destinies
more enticing than Victoria's secret
offering carnal delights
in polyester coated nipples
heart shaped asses
camel toe crotches
bedroom coitus promises
through come hither eyes
delights you'd think
a teen boy from New York
Joe nobody
would easily succumb to
rather than seek God in the woods
where wanking to magazine goddesses
formed from silicon and makeup
answer testosterone's call
yet visions of God and Jesus
in light beams brighter than the sun
loosened his tongue
from the power of the devil
proclaimed all churches abominations
despite public ire
imprisoned for his faith
musket ball gunfire death at the hands of
show me state gangsters
fell dead through
his window of opportunity
his revelations live on in
secret signs and tokens invoked
in the confines of bleach white rooms
families chained together forever
wandering grave yards
peering through microfiche
connecting the dots digitally
seeking to bind their ancestors to them
priesthood rites by proxy
performed by teens
in chlorinated waters to wash away sins
learning their lessons from names
a parade of the dead
benefactors of their youthful
bodies in action
paired, clean cut
black suit, name tag wearing
bicycle riding young men
roll across the globe
on a mission to bring
eternal salvation to all God's children
their loins girded up
in scriptures and surprising undergarments
matrimony their next mission
where the unclean can not enter
no photos of the vows permitted
ordinary in outward appearance
no smoke no drink no coffee nor tea
sacred bodies preserved
with words of wisdom
the worthy
covered with garments taken off only
for bathing, swimming, and creation
in the world but not of this world
the v-chip and parental controls protect them
from Babylon's enticements
low cut, scanty, and tight clothes
dirty dancing
gratuitous violence
profanity
filtered from their presence
four symbols sliced from
worn out garments
are burned
believers are buried in them
resurrected first
at the anointed one's hour
©polarpaul 2007
surprising undergarments worn
after sacred secret ceremonies
in temples built from tithes and offerings
videos show the faithful what to do
garments given Adam in Eden
reveal their eternal origins and destinies
more enticing than Victoria's secret
offering carnal delights
in polyester coated nipples
heart shaped asses
camel toe crotches
bedroom coitus promises
through come hither eyes
delights you'd think
a teen boy from New York
Joe nobody
would easily succumb to
rather than seek God in the woods
where wanking to magazine goddesses
formed from silicon and makeup
answer testosterone's call
yet visions of God and Jesus
in light beams brighter than the sun
loosened his tongue
from the power of the devil
proclaimed all churches abominations
despite public ire
imprisoned for his faith
musket ball gunfire death at the hands of
show me state gangsters
fell dead through
his window of opportunity
his revelations live on in
secret signs and tokens invoked
in the confines of bleach white rooms
families chained together forever
wandering grave yards
peering through microfiche
connecting the dots digitally
seeking to bind their ancestors to them
priesthood rites by proxy
performed by teens
in chlorinated waters to wash away sins
learning their lessons from names
a parade of the dead
benefactors of their youthful
bodies in action
paired, clean cut
black suit, name tag wearing
bicycle riding young men
roll across the globe
on a mission to bring
eternal salvation to all God's children
their loins girded up
in scriptures and surprising undergarments
matrimony their next mission
where the unclean can not enter
no photos of the vows permitted
ordinary in outward appearance
no smoke no drink no coffee nor tea
sacred bodies preserved
with words of wisdom
the worthy
covered with garments taken off only
for bathing, swimming, and creation
in the world but not of this world
the v-chip and parental controls protect them
from Babylon's enticements
low cut, scanty, and tight clothes
dirty dancing
gratuitous violence
profanity
filtered from their presence
four symbols sliced from
worn out garments
are burned
believers are buried in them
resurrected first
at the anointed one's hour
©polarpaul 2007
posted by polarpaul at 8:52 PM
4 Comments:
Hello there! I found you completely by accident as I trawled the internet for some poetry examples for my son.
He has an interest in both writing and reading poetry and I am trying to show him that there is more to the internet than MSN.
I found a good site for teenagers (he is 16) called Teen Ink and I found a few really good sites on Haiku and Sestinas.
You have some wonderful work here but sadly I am not an experienced critic! :) I will be sure to call again.
Wonderful! So vivid with imagery...just fantastic!
great perspective
Writing a about a very sensitive and sexy and turning it into an art is very unique and edgy. The rhyming is well executed. I had read it word by word, sentence by sentence for about 3 times. 2 thumbs up!
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